Rate This Concept Song? Called “sos (dulce Et Decorem Est)”?

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My lyrical vision is what i’m literally showing,
My clinical addiction to sinning is overflowing,
I can’t control it, its physically glowing whenever I’m flowing,
I am addicted to women and booze,
Inflicted with either or both you choose,
I feel like I’m trapped in a game that I always lose,
Like Jumanji, am I losing control,
Like a car when it flips and rolls,
I’m Slipping on the edge and falling in,
Coming out dripping wet not remembering a thing,
The waves are rising and I think I’m capsizing,
Like Jigga with Roca-fella I’m enterprising,
always rising like the sun straight to number one,
But when i start to dry off and have fun,
I fall back and in I’m back to square one,
Someone set off a flair son, SOS I think I need some.
(Chorus)
SOS,I’m Falling, I’m falling deep, too much stress,
I’m screaming and clawing but no one hears a peep,
Its like I’m wide awake while your fast asleep,
Dulce Et Decorem Est?, all I want is SOS.
I’ll place a bet,
that tonigh I wake in a cold sweat,
Haunted by demons I’m cold I’m screaming,
down my face the tears are streaming,
I hear a blast from the past and the call of death,
I’m smashing like a vase and theres no glue left,
I keep seeing him take his last breath,
I keep fleeing but can’t escape the stress,
Bombs can’t be with stood by a bulletproof vest,
I’m easily set off when my buttons are pressed,
I can’t sleep at night its too bright I can’t rest,
I saw the light and now its keeping me compressed,
like a weight resting down on my chest,
was this fate i don’t know i must confess,
When will I find relief and have peace,
that can end all this and let out whats underneath,
reveal it like a sheath I try to talk but I can’t speak,
The last week is not unique its been like ever since,
That night in the heat we needed help but never got some,
SOS I think I need some
(Chorus)
SOS,I’m Falling, I’m falling deep, too much stress,
I’m screaming and clawing but no one hears a peep,
Its like I’m wide awake while your fast asleep,
Dulce Et Decorem Est?, all I want is SOS.
I had the dream again last night so vivid,
I was so livid when reminded about what they did,
he was my friend since I was a kid,
we wanted to see what adventure would bring,
so we joined up 18 years old didn’t know anything,
About two months in out on patrol working,
Guns at hips walking, streets bustling and people talking,
But we didn’t know what was stalking,
didn’t know someone had been planting,
schemes and bombs kill dreams and teens,
last thing I remember was waking up in blood streams,
he died there in the mud and waste it seems,
Dulce Et Decorem Est I heard from someone,
I don’t agree but SOS I need some,
(Chorus)
SOS,I’m Falling, I’m falling deep, too much stress,
I’m screaming and clawing but no one hears a peep,
Its like I’m wide awake while your fast asleep,
Dulce Et Decorem Est? all I want is SOS.